Letter writing style guide

Following a few simple steps will increase the odds that your letter will be published.

  • Keep it short.  You should keep your letter under 200 words, arranged in at least two paragraphs.  If your letter is too long, your most important point may be cut.  Newspapers reserve the right to edit the letters they publish. Check out The Communications Consortium Center for guidelines per newspaper, such as The Washington Post or The New York Times.
  • Be timely.  If you see an opportunity to respond to an article or opinion piece with a letter to the editor, write and submit your letter as soon as possible.  What matters to the editor(s) this week, may not matter the next.
  • Focus.  The first sentence of your letter should explain why you are writing.  Make it as easy as possible for the editorial staff to understand the purpose of your letter.  Example: The Star seemed to fall short of its normally high standards in presenting Senator John Kerry's views on high gasoline prices in Tuesday's edition.  This sentence tells the editorial staff reading it that you are a regular reader, that you respectfully take issue with a particular article or opinion piece, and that you intend to provide them with information.
  • Make your point.  Following your opening sentence, the next sentence should state your issue/argument, correction, or additional information.

    Example: Senator Kerry is a strong supporter of common sense solutions to America's dependence on foreign oil and has a great plan that will work for Kansas.

  • Relate your letter to the newspaper's readers.  Make it local.  Example: Senator Kerry is a strong supporter of common sense solutions to America's dependence on foreign oil and has a great plan that will work for Kansas.  Our trucks and tractors are at the heart of our agricultural economy.  Real leadership means caring about how policies affect people and Senator Kerry understands that Kansans need affordable fuel to do the job of feeding the nation. 
  • Use simple language.  Easy-to-understand language is best and ensures that your message will not be misunderstood.
  • Positive language makes positive points.  People like other people who are positive - an important point to remember when you are writing a letter to the editor.  After all, you are writing to express your opinion and to persuade others to believe as you do. 
  • Examples of positive words to use in support of John Kerry: active, building, capable, caring, challenge, choose, commitment, common sense, compete, concerned, confident, courage, dream, fairness, family, freedom, heart, help, home, humane, intelligent, lead, leadership, learn, liberty, light, moral, movement, opportunity, our, passionate, peace, preserve, principle, pro-(issue, such as children, environment, etc), prosperity, protect, proud, provide, share, strength, strong, team, tough, truth, united, us, vision, warmth, we, wisdom, work.
  • Avoid negative "insult" language.  It is much more difficult to persuade people with a negative argument using negative language.  By trying to make a negative point, the reader may feel insulted or irritated.
  • Examples of negative words to avoid: anti-(issue), betray, collapse, consequences, corrupt, crisis, destroy, endanger, greed, hypocrisy, impose, incompetent, liar, limit, permissive, radical, selfish, them, they, traitors, worry.
  • Use your last (closing sentence) to make a strong statement.  Example: With his commitment to alternative fuels, conservation, and sensible oil exploration, Senator Kerry has earned my vote in November.
  • Here is the sample letter, using the steps we have described: Dear Editor:   The Star seemed to fall short of its normally high standards in presenting Senator John Kerry's views on high gasoline prices in Tuesday's edition.   Senator Kerry is a strong supporter of common sense solutions to America's dependence on foreign oil and has a great plan that will work for Kansas.  Our trucks and tractors are at the heart of our agricultural economy.  Real leadership means caring about how policies affect people and Senator Kerry understands that Kansans need affordable fuel to do the job of feeding the nation.   With his commitment to alternative fuels, conservation and sensible oil exploration, John Kerry has earned my vote in November.   Name Address Home phone Work phone Email address  
  • Always include your name and contact information.  The easier it is for the editor(s) to contact you, the better your chances of having your letter published.  Make it easy for them to contact you to confirm that you wrote the letter (and not someone simply using your name).  Newspapers will not publish your phone numbers or email address - only your name, city and state.
  • Proofread, check spelling, and proofread again.  If you use a word processor, use the spell check and grammar check features.  Ask a friend to look at the letter.  Another pair of eyes can help you write a letter to the editor that gets published.